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Review: The Unintentional Time Traveler
4/5 stars. Buy at: Amazon
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The Unintentional Time Traveler by Everett Maroon is the story of teenage Jack Bishop, whose epilepsy ends up with him put into an experimental program to try to cure him. Unexpectedly (to say the least), this causes him to travel back in time and find himself in the body of 1920s teenage girl, Jaqueline. But as Jack repeatedly jumps between time periods, losing stretches of time along the way, things get complicated in both the past, with a prohibition-era self-proclaimed prophet ruling the town by violence, and in the present (or is it?), as his actions cause rippling repercussions…
Overall, I found this a delightful read with a great narrator and a strong theme of identity. Moving between time periods (both in the “past”, and by the way losing time caused him to have to resettle in his life without knowing what’s gone on in it) and bodies brings up a strong theme about how identity itself is experiential. The situations you live through in both different time periods and different bodies: both affect your identity. Jack’s narrative voice grows and evolves throughout as a result of this variety of experiences.
There’s a lot of disconnect and skipping in the book. Both as Jack and as Jac, the protagonist finds that he ‘returns’ to whichever time to find that life has literally gone on without him. The changes in the world and technology aside, he comes back to Jack (for example) to find that he’s gone through puberty, or got a girlfriend, or got a job. All of which he didn’t remember, because the Jack who did it wasn’t him—or was, but was living life as a Jack who was separate in time. The story starts out fairly straightforward and linear and gets more disconnected and jagged the longer Jack spends in a different time and body, or the more Jack goes back to reset things. I liked this quite a bit because the disconnect is deliberate and plays well into the sense of being about an experience, learning things by living them, not by understanding how they’ve developed.
The only way I was drawn out of the story is that at several key decision points (both in the romance and in the plot), we don’t see Jack’s POV on why he’s making a decision to act. We just see the dialogue around it, or a skip to it happening. We’re in Jack’s POV throughout the story and hear a constant entertaining self-deprecating dialogue, so these moments really stood out to me. We’re experiencing so many discoveries along with Jack that not seeing the mental decisions to take those steps makes it feel very blank in comparison to what we’re reading the rest of the time. I feel it may be deliberate, to play around with the concept of disconnect/skipping/experience, but since we’re solidly in a time/setting/body and are seeing thoughts leading up to that and right after the relevant story-driving decisions are made, the lack of seeing Jack make those steps felt odd to me.
Overall, a fun adventure with great characters and a solid theme. I’m looking forward to seeing what the next Time Guardians book will have to offer.
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Beauty and Cruelty 6 month anniversary Giveaway!
Cruelty, once an evil fairy and now working in fast food, comes home one day to find the lazy, drooling King of Cats on her doorstep. Worse, he comes bearing news Cruelty would be happier not hearing: Sleeping Beauty has gotten tired of lying around and is trying to save the world Cruelty left long ago.
Any respectable Archetype knows it’s a waste of time; their chances of survival are much better if they can hide in the human world. But since nobody sent her an invitation to the world-saving, she’s practically obligated to interfere.
It turns out that the six month birthday of my first book, Beauty and Cruelty, falls in the same month as my (not six month) birthday, and what better present for either of us* than knowing that it’s being read?
* That’s kind of a major theme of the book actually, fairy tale characters wanting to know their story is being read.
So I’m hosting a giveaway! I will be offering:
- One signed print copy of the book
- Two ebook copies of the book
Why might you want to read it? Well, the novel includes:
- A main f/f ship, along with some side m/m and poly romances.
- A fat orange cat who just wants to be petted. Pls pet. Y u not pet?
- A Sleeping Beauty who is ready to fight the world
- An evil fairy who is maybe ready to stop always fighting Sleeping Beauty??
- A world in peril, a princess to the rescue, & some dumb swans having personal problems
- Actually, technically there are two fat orange cats.
Use the link below to enter the contest!
Beauty and Cruelty Giveaway!
I’m a new author and don’t have many followers, so if you like what you see, I’d really appreciate it if you would follow me on twitter and tumblr, retweet the link and reblog the tumblr post even if you’re not looking to win a copy—you won’t be entered unless you also fill out the details on the linked widget.
Beauty and Cruelty can also be purchased at its publisher, lessthanthreepress, in print or ebook, and at Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and most other major online retailers.Please also consider checking out my recent release, The Cybernetic Tea Shop, about an asexual homoromantic mechanic meeting a cute robot girl, or my upcoming story, The Cobbler’s Soleless Son, about a young man who sets out to romance a demon prince (save 15% if you preorder!).
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New Website
Website get!! So many thanks to my lovely fiancee for all her hard work pulling this together, and to RubyD for the header image.
I’m also excited to announce the upcoming release of a new story, The Cobbler’s Soleless Son! Do you like demons with plans afoot, people carelessly falling head over heels, and daring feats? Then you’re sure to get a kick out of walking a mile in Renart’s shoes! Don’t worry too much about having to foot the bill—order before the release date of August 23 to get a toe-tally great 15% off!
(I solemnly swear that puns are actually minimal in the story itself.)
There’s more excitement coming in a few days, so you can track my updates with the “follow” button at the bottom of the page, or by following me on twitter or tumblr!
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Release: The Cybernetic Tea Shop
Please welcome The Cybernetic Tea Shop, a story about a robot girl who is stuck in the past and a lady mechanic always moving on into the future.
Where to purchase:
Less Than Three ❤ Amazon (Kindle)❤ Barnes & Noble ❤ Bookstrand ❤ Smashwords ❤ Kobo ❤ iTunes (including non-us iTunes) ❤ Overdrive ❤ Scribd
If you enjoyed, please consider rating and/or reviewing on Goodreads!
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Release: Beauty & Cruelty
Please welcome Beauty and Cruelty, a story about Sleeping Beauty and the evil fairy banding together to save their world by changing the meaning of their story.
Where to purchase:
Less Than Three ❤ Amazon (Print)❤ Amazon (Kindle)
❤ Barnes & Noble ❤ Bookstrand ❤ Smashwords ❤ Kobo ❤ iTunes (including non-us iTunes) ❤ Overdrive ❤ Scribd
If you enjoyed, please consider rating and/or reviewing on Goodreads!